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Stephen

Burnt

 sad, i guess...
..."Stand in the shower,Clean this dirty mess, Give me back my power, And drown this unholiness.

Lean over the toilet bowl, And throw up my confession, Cleanse my soul, Of this hidden obsession. -lucinda williams
Casey

Electronic

Hallway

 I am having a hard time getting past the part where the blue electric rain pumps hot from his pen.....wow ! Thanks for the visual...and making my ankles itch.
John Crack House I enjoyed the characterization in this story. Good descriptions of the different characters backgrounds and objectives and they were brought together beautifully at the end. Good stuff man.
Brian Mystery No More I read this poetic art and realized how powerful somebody's mind
can be, even if they are restricted by the walls surrounding them. Its a
strong message, this one...